This half year has been fantastic 2 terms



because I complete my work and I have moved


up it my math group and I have a lovely teacher


Miss Zee that helps me and when I need help shes

always there to help anyone but she doesn't do your work.

So the last 2 terms have be an enjoyable term.


A Mihi represents who

you are and who family is .

Tena Koutou Katou

Ko Ruapeu te maunga

Ko Manawatu te awa

Ko Pope te iwi

No Papaieoa ahau

Ko Joanna toku mama

Ko Sean toku papa

Ko Jasmine toku ingoa

Tena Koutou, Tena Koutou, Tena Koutou Katou.

I This helps us ith our writing so we can think of new ideas to help us write.

Open

Vegemite

With

Colourful

Screwdrivers

I = ideas

Open = organization

Vegemite = voice

With = word choice

Colourful = conventions

Screwdrivers = sentence fluency

Good writing


IDEAS that are interesting
and important.

ORGANIZATION that is
logical and effective.

VOICE that is individual
and appropriate.

WORD CHOICE that is
Specific and memorable.

SENTENCE FLUENCY that
is smooth and musical.


CONVENTIONS that are
correct and communicative.

Camp 2011


My cabin woke up around 7.30 half an hour from breakfast so we quickly tied up our out of our p.j's and quickly got our covered shoes on. It was such a rush for us girls because Char keep hogging the mirror. Most of our activities were done by Rachel she was the best instructor there because she let the adults join in Simone and Bruce join in at Archery, Grass Karts , Zipline, Catwalk, my main goal was to face my fears of heights which I did by pretending that I was walking on chocolate and lollies I was proud of myself. It was a good night we went for a walk for glow worms it was to early and everyone was to loud to see the glow worms, so we went to the bomb fire. Cha brought her friend with her, she plays the guitar and they sung songs together. After a while we got some marshmallows and Triton keep knocking everyones off, so everyone got a second one, apart from Triton. When we got back, a group of 4 went to go see the glow worms, its was me, Angel, Chante and Elizabeth. There were thousands of them, there were some on trees and all other the place. After we got back from the glow worms we had to go to bed, but our cabin stayed up for a bit and talked.

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Term 4 2011


Term 4 has been very fast. Camp, testing and lots of work to caught up on. It takes hard work and time to get all this work finished. When we got back from camp it was full on testing and completing unfinished work to complete. The work that I have been doing is very challenging and I can complete it.
I really pushed myself to complete my work and to do other things by pushing myself to do that. Its been really challenging but I finished untill everything was completed.